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2013年8月3日雅思写作考试范文
2013-08-06 12:00来源：互联网责编：上海管理员
摘要：2013年8月3日雅思写作考试范文
Sample Essay
这篇文章有点儿小长 (424 words)，对于考生来说，达到文章字数的2/3即可轻松过关，但是文章的结构、布局、论点都非常精彩，请各位小主耐心看完。
Introduction 开头段
In most societies nowadays, a tendency which individuals in cities prefer to live alone or in small family units, instead of living in large, extended families can be observed. (描述背景，转述题目) Some may argue this is beneficial to both younger and the older generations on one hand while others insist there are some certain negative effects on the other. (点明题目中两种立场) The writer’s perspective may be in agreement with the saying that such appearance has mainly positive impact on youngster and otherwise parents. (作者的立场和态度)
Body 主体段 (3段)
Living alone, which means people, especially those youngsters who just left their home and parents, should learn washing dirty clothes, tidying the room and cooking by themselves, helps individuals to cultivate their independence. (种对独居者来说积极的方面+举例) Besides, another important lesson they can learn from living individually is how to cope with the unexpected and the urgent, for instance, dealing with conflicts between neighbours or calling an ambulance due to the acute appendicitis. These can greatly enrich their social experiences. (第二种积极的影响+举例)
For some parents, they choose to live in small family units because they can focus more on their children’s physical and mental growth. (对于父母来说积极的方面) In large families, dividing up time between children never ends up being equal and this is damaging to each child's emotional and intellectual development and can have lasting effects. (对比) In comparison with large families, a smaller family structure makes it much easier for a child to spend time with each parent while receiving the emotional reinforcement they need. (论证)
On the flip side, some persons who have long lived apart may suffer from loneliness, solitude or even homesickness. (先写对独居者的影响) There would be not adequate communication and interaction between those living alone and living in small family units and their family members. (对独居者和小家庭生活者的消极影响) Accordingly, it seems that reading an article aloud for the elderly relatives, watching a watching a film together or playing a board game with them are not easily to achieve for people living in these two lifestyles. (举例论证) Another important source of evidence receiving much attention is that family members are the main beneficiary of close relationships with extended family. (观点2) Therefore, older family members can share parenting advice and help care for children. Meanwhile, children, in particular, benefit from the wisdom and experiences gained from these relationships. (用老人和小孩举例)
Conclusion结尾段
In conclusion, it might be plausible somehow that living in large, extended family groups has certain advantages and living alone or in tight family structure may be detrimental to some extent. (概括让步段(主体段最后一段)中自身不太倾向那个观点) Overwhelming evidence, however, supports the claim that living apart from large families can not only be conductive to youngsters’ growth, but to children’s both physical, emotional and mental development as well. (重申自身更倾向的那一方观点，即重申赞同观点)
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