托福独立写作例文(2008.1.5NA/2013.11.2ML)

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 　 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.
　　Making friends are indispensable in everyone's life. There is no denying the fact that intelligent and humor are two vital characters of a good friend. Some people, however, may claim that it is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.As for me , I'm quite agree with it
　　To begin with, intelligent friends often enlighten us and teach us something useful which is benefit for our life and career. It means that we will be inflenced by intelligent people and inclined to gain some characters from them. Most importantly, intelligent friends also have a proper goal. They manage their time for their goal, implementing it and complementing themselves, so they have a relatively high probability to success in their life. Staying long with a friend who is intelligent like this, we will be intelligent gruadually too. We can learn a lot of wholesome things from them, but a friend who have a good sense of humor just can brings us jokes. In our daily life, I thought intelligence is user than jokes.
　　Furthermore, an intelligent friend helps us more when we are in trouble. Compared with the humorous friends, an intelligent peole think more about the problem in a rational way. Useful suggestions and help from them will of much more importance to resolve the trouble we meet. For instance, if I was in trouble, those friends who are intelligent are more likely to put forth some constructive suggestions for me, while humorous friends may make a joke on me in a improper time. Although their jokes will relax me temporary, but in fact it is suggestion that resovle the problem at this moment and jokes do nothing.
　　Nevertheless, a humorous friend is also benefical to us. We will have fun and happiness when we stay with them, which probable leads a high efficiency in our work and studying.To sum up, it will be a pleasure to make friends both with intelligent people and humorous people. If I have to choose, however, I prefer to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor for the reason above.

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　　Do you agree with the saying that it's better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor.
　　Making friends is indispensable for everyone. There is no denying that intelligence(改名词) and humor are two vital features of  a good friend. Some people, however, may claim that it is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor. As for me, I can't agree more with it.
　　To begin with, intelligent friends often enlighten us and teach us something useful which is a benefit to our life and career. It means that we will be influenced by intelligent people and incline to gain some characters from them. Most importantly, intelligent friends also have a proper goal. They manage their time for their goal, implementing it and complementing by themselves, so they have a relatively high probability to succeed in their life. Staying along with a friend who is intelligent like this, we will gruadually  become more intelligent too. We can learn a lot of wholesome things from them, but a friend who have a good sense of humor just can bring us jokes and fun. In our daily life, I think intelligence is more useful than jokes.
　　Furthermore, an intelligent friend helps us more when we are in trouble. Compared with the humorous friends, an intelligent peole thinks more about the problem in a rational way. Useful suggestions and help from them are of much more importance to resolve the trouble we meet. For instance, if I am in trouble, those friends who are intelligent are more likely to put forth  constructive suggestions for me, while humorous friends may make a joke on me in a improper circumstance. Although their jokes will relax me temporary, but in fact it is suggestion that resovles the problem at this moment while jokes can do nothing.
　　Nevertheless, a humorous friend is also benefical to us. We will have fun and happiness when we stay with them, which probable leads to a high efficiency in our work and study.To sum up, it will be a pleasure to make friends both with intelligent people and humorous people. If I have to choose, however, I prefer to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor for the reasons above.

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