托福写作要善于套用例子(2)

接上一篇内容《托福写作要善于套用例子(1)》.

(2)细例——细致的例子

“细例”就是具体到一个人、一个物，或一件事，可以是实际存在的，也可以无中生有。这类例子使托福写作更加鲜活，更有说服力，通常也能占据更长一些的篇幅，平时有意识地积累并灵活联系，写起这类例子来才会更加得心应手。

a. 实际存在的，一方面，这类例子可以是身边，家人、朋友、自己和身边发生的一些事情;另一方面就是名人和一些被报道出来的“名事”了

观点2： Mistakes serve as vivid, sometimes painful deterrents from certain action.

细例2： A friend of mine suffering from smoking-induced lung disease would remember the emotional and physical pain associated with the side-effects of tobacco usage. Not only does he recall the smell of hospitals, the imprint of pain on the face of someone who died from smoking, but he would also link these memories immediately with cigarettes.

观点3： You cannot judge a person only by his or her appearance.

细例3： Susan Boyle is one of those. Such an appearance has long been rumored, but her incredible voice and stunning performance on BGT has won her great popularity.

b. 此外，"细例"的无中生有就是假设论证，常用if，supposing等开头。

观点4： Individuals play a significant role in alleviating traffic congestion.

细例4： If 30 people get on a public bus instead of 30 individual cars, there will be far fewer automobiles on the road, greatly easing the traffic burden.

通过上面新托福写作真经的介绍相信大家对于如何使用例子都有了解了，新托福写作中例子不是一摆就完事的，大家还需要简化提炼，这样才能让自己的托福写作文章显得有档次。 接下来是一篇例证的范文：

Some people like to keep records or experiences by exposing photos on social networking sites. Others do not like to create such records. Which way do you prefer?

If there is one word that best describes the modern world, that word would undoubtedly be “ technology “. The world technology is creeping into everybody’s daily life unconsciously. One of the greatest innovations in this century is Facebook launched by Mark Zuckerburg, providing a convenient platform on which people could freely exchange ideas and share their pictures. However, due to the large volume of data collected about users, the service’s privacy has faced doubt and suspicion among critics. As far as I am concerned, the drawbacks of this sharing method outweigh its counterparts.

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