南京国际学校加试真题 | 第20期：“以退为进”很重要

　　在第16期的专栏里南京国际学校小编为大家讲解了作文的开头段改写方式，本期我们将继续完成这篇文章的主体段，教大家如何正确使用让步逻辑展开论述。

　　首先我们来了解一下什么叫作“让步”：

　　简单来说，让步的目的就是“以退为进”，在句子中我们通常用让步状语从句来表达让步的概念，比如：

　　Though I believe it, yet I must consider.

　　Child as he was, he knew what was the right thing to do.

　　引导让步状语的连词还有很多，比如while, even if/though...同学们课后可以参照语法书及例句总结一下哦～

　　那么我们继续来看这道作文题：

　　Cars make life convenient for many people in Nanjing. However, the increase in cars is leading to more traffic and more air pollution.

　　Should the City Government of Nanjing put more limits on the number of cars on the city streets? Explain the reasons for your opinion. Provide at least two examples to support your opinion.

　　针对Should the City Government of Nanjing put more limits on the number of cars on the city streets?这个task，假设我们不同意这个proposal，就可以尝试利用让步来引出我们的观点——

　　Although too many cars may cause traffic jam and air pollution, I still think that the city government shouldn’t put limits on the number pf cars on our city streets.

　　写完后细读一下这个句子，大家有没有发现我们并没有把不同意的原因说清楚，仅仅从反面观点直接跳跃到了结论，因此我们可以适当添加驳斥内容，把前面的观点反驳掉，再给出自己的观点及理由——

　　Although too many cars may cause traffic jam and air pollution, the convenience that they bring to our lives is considerable, so I don’t think it is a good idea to restrict the producing of cars in our city for the following two main reasons.

　　(作为开头段的最后一句话，可以适当埋下伏笔，暗示接下来的写作方向。)

　　完成这句话后，我们来回顾一下它的逻辑：

　　让步 -> 反驳 -> 结论 -> 原因

　　这样就使得原本平淡无奇的观点表述变得有理有据且有力量，看完南京国际学校小编介绍的这些，大家有没有学会呢～