老师感慨，雅思写作想考6分，语法就要这样做！如何考到雅思写作6分？

1）主谓一致

- The number of cars are increasing in large cities. ❌ 

- The number of cars is increasing in large cities. ☑️

2）run-on sentence 

- Like other consumer items, they can be used to express individual taste and identity, however, they also clearly have a number of undesirable consequences. ❌

- Like other consumer items, they can be used to express individual taste and identity. However, they also clearly have a number of undesirable consequences. ☑️

1) 句子残缺Fragment:

- Whether the government should be responsible for the health of all individuals. ❌

- Whether the government should be responsible for the health of all individuals is under discussion.☑️

2）逻辑批判Logical Prediction：

- XiaoMing climbed the mountain carrying XiaoHong. ❌

- XiaoMing climbed the mountain, carrying XiaoHong. ☑️

3）指代：

- The unemployment rates in the UK and Japan increased to around 25% over the first half of the period. It fell by 10% over the next five years. ❌

- The unemployment rates in the UK and Japan increased to around 25% over the first half of the period, but the figure for the UK fell by 10% over the next five years. ☑️

4) 时态：

- Next, the machine is cutting dough sheets into dough strips. ❌

- Next, the machine cuts dough sheets into dough strips. ☑

5) 动作发出者：

- Comparing with the money people earns, the sense of achievement is more important. ❌

- Compared with the money people earns, the sense of achievement is more important. ☑️

6) 平行呼应：

- The percentage of females was higher than males. ❌

- The percentage of females was higher than that of males. ☑

Systemic Error：Chinglish

- People are easy to communicate with their friends through social networking sites. ❌

- It is easy for people to communicate with their friends through social networking sites. ☑️

- People can communicate with their friends easily through social networking sites. ☑️

- Social networking sites make it easier for people to communicate with their friends. ☑️