居然想把这些词用在雅思写作里？！你的7分快没了！

　　小编一直有跟同学们强调雅思写作的学术性和正式性，不管在小作文还是大作文中都应如此。

　　只有一种情况例外，那就是考G类雅思的同学在写小作文要求的书信类文章时，可以采用非正式的语言。不过关注小编的大部分同学应该考的都是A类，用词学术化这一点一定要注意，不然很有可能会影响最后的得分!

　　很多同学并没有意识到自己使用的是不适合用在雅思写作中的词，所以今天南京雅思培训机构小编就替大家抓出来了这些词/词组!看完赶紧将它们从自己的写作词库中删去!

　　ps.有的词可能有多层含义，小编都给出了同义替换表达，同学们要注意根据不同的使用场景和需求来选择哦~

　　cheap

　　应改为：inexpensive

　　例句：CDs are a fairly inexpensive way to store data.

　　right

　　应改为：correct/accurate/proper

　　例句：With proper training, most people can learn leadership skills.

　　wrong

　　应改为：incorrect/inaccurate/improper

　　例句：It's simply incorrect to say that tobacco advertising does not influence young people.

　　keep

　　应改为：retain/preserve/maintain

　　例句：A lot of information can be retained in computers.

　　kid/kids

　　应改为：child/children

　　例句：Young children are naturally curious about the world.

　　great/huge/amazing/awesome

　　应改为：

　　considerable/exceptional/influential/essential等

　　例句：Caring for elderly relatives requires considerable moral courage.

　　awful/ugly/horrible/useless

　　应改为：

　　inadequate/unacceptable/harmful/damaging/detrimental等

　　例句：Emissions from the factory are widely suspected of having a detrimental effect on health.

　　To get

　　“get”这个词在英文中可以说是最常见、最常用的单词之一了，它能表达许多意思，所以小编会根据不同的含义来给同学们介绍：

　　Ⅰ. 应改为：receive/obtain

　　例句：

　　Information could be easily obtained from the internet.

　　Ⅱ. 应改为：purchase/acquire/earn

　　例句：

　　It's not uncommon nowadays for women to earn more salaries than their husbands.

　　very/really/so/too

　　应改为：

　　可以直接去掉;或者改为“vastly/especially/immensely/excessively”

　　例句：

　　■ a very dangerous situation → a dangerous situation

　　■ Communication, management, and supervisory skills have vastly improved.

　　use

　　应改为：employ/utilize/consume

　　例句：

　　We must consider how best to utilize what resources we have.

　　fast

　　应改为：rapid/speedy/dramatic/sharp

　　例句：

　　The industry is experiencing rapid change.

　　go

　　应改为：depart/disappear/travel/proceed

　　例句：

　　The data proceeded slowly until 2000.

　　make

　　应改为：

　　create/form/manufacture/produce/build/develop等

　　例句：

　　On the other hand, millions of new jobs have also been created.

　　上面这些词，南京雅思培训机构小编都不建议同学们再在雅思写作中使用啦，同学可以对照着上面的内容，检查一下自己是否有用到过它们，及时改正哦!这样也能更有利于同学们在词汇方面获得精进，更快拿到7分以上的分数!