南京雅思 | 雅思写作中避免使用口语化词汇，用多样的同义替换表达！
雅思写作中避免使用口语化词汇，用多样的同义替换表达！同学们都知道雅思写作要求词汇多样性，也积累了一堆同义替换词，但你知不知道在写作时不可以用什么词呢?
比如说，你会不会在写作中用到“kid”，“guy”，“thing”这样的单词?小编想告诉你的是，这些词非常口语化，用于雅思写作的话，你会在用词准确度上被扣分。并且，类似于“good”，“but”，“very”这类单词含义过于简单，频繁使用会让你的表达缺乏词汇多样性，导致扣分。
所以，同学们一定在雅思写作中要避免口语化词汇，还要用多样的同义替换表达!接下来就让新航道南京雅思小编告诉你要怎么做~
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避免口语化词汇：kid, guy, thing等
“kid”、“stuff”、“guy” 这类名词是口语化用词，必须替换为相应的书面用语：
(1)kid / kids
替换词： child / children
例句：Parents should never treat their children violently.
(2) guy / fellow / dude / bloke
替换词： people / individuals / one
例句：The cultivated individuals have been imbued with (充满) a sense of social purpose.
(3) stuff / thing
替换词： issues / ways / aspects
例句：One of the crucial ways to fight global warming is to limit the CO2 emissions.
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避免口语化短语：kind of, sort of
除了以上不能用的单词以外，“kind of”， “sort of” 短语也非常口语化，同学们不要使用到写作中，直接剔除即可。
错误用法：
The result were sort of unclear.
This animal are kind of slow in movement.
正确用法：
The results were unclear.
This animal is slow in movement.
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避免缩写
除了要避免口语化的单词以外，同学们还要避免含缩写符号“ ’ ”的缩写词汇，要写全完整形式。
例如：
I'm - I am
It isn't - It is not
It doesn't – It does not
It's known – It is known
I'd like to – I would like to
It can't – It cannot
It won't – It will not
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可被替换的形容词：good, awful等
“good”、“great”、“awful”这些单词过于简单。同学们要替换成含义更准确的形容词，能体现出更高的词汇水平。
(1)good / great / amazing / awesome
替换词： considerable / exceptional / influential / extraordinary / significant / essential / crucial / special / critical / pivotal / beneficial
例句：① There are significant gaps in technological development across countries.② Admittedly, self-improvement is crucial for new graduates to hunt jobs.
(2)awful / ugly / horrible / terrible
替换词： poor / unwelcome / unsatisfactory / unfavourable / unacceptable / imperfect / harmful / damaging / detrimental / undesirable / dangerous / unhealthy
例句：① Poor eating habits are detrimental to health.② Rubbishy commercials and harmful programmes contribute to the rise in violence and crime in the street.
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可被替换的动词：get
动词“get”可以用含义更具体的词替换：
例如，语境中有含“得到”的意思时，可以使用：
receive / obtain / acquire / earn
例句：Less formally educated people can acquire professional competence.
含“到达”的意思时，用：
reach / arrive at
例句：Demand for the product has reached saturation point.
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可被替换短语a lot of, a few等
“a lot of”、“a few”等词组可以替换为更多样的表达方式。
(1)a lot of / lots of
替换词：
many / much / a large number of / the majority of
例句：The city is home to a large number of musicians and artists.
(2)a few / a bit of / a couple of
替换词：
some / several / a small number of
例句：A small number of children are educated at home.
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可被替换的连词
连词“but”、“so”、“also”可以在写作中使用，但是频繁使用的话，显得用词单一没有亮点，可以通过同义替换，增加词汇多样性。
(1)but
替换词：
however / nevertheless / although
例句：However, many other subjects are equally important.
(2)so
替换词：
therefore / accordingly / consequently
例句：Therefore, a varied curriculum brings the best results.
(3)also
替换词：
moreover / additionally / besides / furthermore
例句：Moreover, children benefit from learning foreign languages.
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可被替换的副词：very, really等
像“very”, “so”, “really”等程度副词过于模糊，不能精确地表达程度，而且过于频繁地使用还会降低词汇丰富程度，所以不建议同学们在写作中使用。
同学们可以将“副词(very / so / really)+形容词”换成“形容词+名词”的结构。
例如，可以用“of+adj.+n.”结构，so / very important可以换成of great importance。
或者可以直接将这些程度副词删除，例如a really strong proposal直接说a strong proposal。
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