雅思流程图不会写?快来试试这个写法!雅思小作文主要考查图表的描述和总结对比能力,因为在日常生活中基本上接触不到,所以大多数中国学生很不习惯这种考试形式。
在形形色色的图表中,有一种出现频率不高,但是杀伤力超强的形式 ---- 流程图,着实让人抓狂。
这让众多考生都有种默契:如果考试遇到了该图,那就当喜提“重在参与”卡吧。
可是流程图真的那么难吗?
我们的答案肯定是“no”!!
大家只要记住流程图的解决办法两个字——“步骤”就可以了。新航道南京雅思辅导班老师以下面的真题为例。
“水循环”流程图分析
The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
观察这幅图,大家会发现,这是一个和自然现象相关的流程图,图中标注出了不同的自然地形的名称。
同时,还有一些对写作很有帮助的现象解释,比如这幅图,就给大家介绍了evaporation(蒸发)的过程。
在动笔之前,和常规的流程图一样,我们需要先分析图中有多少个步骤,并决定用哪个作为写作的第一步骤。接着我们结合图示,加上自己的常识,完成对每一个步骤的描述。
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开头段:改写题目
和其他小作文一样,流程图的开头段也是改写题目。因为这是一个自然现象,所以我们可以使用“natural process"这个单词。
The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the water cycle.
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综述段:概述重要步骤
写一下一共有多少个步骤,提一下第一个步骤和最后一个步骤。你可以任意选择将哪一个步骤作为第一个步骤,我选的是Ocean。
Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the oceans again.
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描述段:详细描述每一个
注意图中的箭头方向,运用适当的连接词,把每一个步骤有条理的连接在一起。注意写作中动词语态的使用。比如,在表达时,是"water evaporates",而不是"water is evaporated"。
观察流程图每个步骤的内容,对需要描写的步骤,适当的加入常识性理解。
比如第一个过程,80%的水分从海里蒸发,其原因是受到了来自太阳的热量,所以在描述时,我们需要写出”heat from the sun causes…”接着我们看到图中,云上写着”condensing water vapor”于是我们需要用到form这样的词,去介绍云的形成。
Beginning at the evaporation stage, we can see that 80% of water vapor in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapor condenses to form clouds. At the second stage, labelled "precipitation" on the diagram, water falls as rain or snow.
根据图片,我们能看出,降雨有几种不同的路径,所以在描述时需要结合图上的箭头一一写出来。在这幅图中,最后一个步骤是”Salt water intrusion”这个步骤,帮助整个步骤形成闭环,所以在写作时,我们可以点一下,显得更加完整。
At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakes or return to the oceans via "surface runoff". Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.
考官完整范文:
The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the water cycle.
Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the oceans again.
Beginning at the evaporation stage, we can see that 80% of water vapor in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapor condenses to form clouds. At the second stage, labelled "precipitation" on the diagram, water falls as rain or snow.
At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakes or return to the oceans via "surface runoff". Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle. (156 words, Band 9)
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