如何将高频第一的雅思口语话题《别人给你的衣服》和其他的物品类Part 2相结合?今天新航道南京雅思辅导班小编为大家选取了高频排名第一的话题《别人给你的衣服》。
虽然之前也有讲解衣服类的话题,但它们的小问题略微还是有些不同,为此想要重新做一番讲解。
Describe an item of clothing that someone gave you
You should say:
• What the clothing was
• When you got it
• Who gave it to you
• And explain why the person gave it to you
我相信拿到此题,很多同学瞬间想到的就是别人在生日的时候送你的一件衣服。说实话,这样的回答略显老土的同时,还缺乏深意。
那么这个衣服该怎么挑选呢?我们从"给衣服"的动机出发:
动机一:Gift 礼物
"送礼"是最普遍的动机之一,不过我们需要再重点思考"为什么要送礼"的原因:
1. 表达关心
表面上是生日礼物,其实是因为他关心你。比如:考虑到你所在的城市太冷,或者考虑到你在毕业后需要一件西装,他就贴心的为你准备了。
2. 表达感谢
有的时候送礼,是为了"show gratitude and appreciation"。比如:我朋友送了我一件T恤,其实主要原因是为了感谢我之前帮了他个什么忙。
3. 拉近关系
通过一份礼物,也可以把两人的关系拉近。为此,送你衣服的人可能是一个刚认识不久的人,他希望通过这份礼物可以让你变得更为亲近;也有可能这个人本来就和你相识已久,但因为太久没有联系略显生疏,他希望通过送一件你喜欢的衣服可以恢复下关系。
PS:以上观点也完全符合话题《特殊的蛋糕》。蛋糕的特殊不一定是因为外表的特殊,它可以是因为这是一个表达感激的蛋糕而让你觉得它很特殊。除此之外,以上观点也可以成为《你想要送别人礼物》的观点。
动机二:Lying idle 闲置送人
我相信绝大多数人的小时候都穿过哥哥姐姐穿过的衣服。为此,"Hand-me-down" (传下来的)也很值得我们思考。这件衣服可以来自己家人也可以是朋友,至于为什么给你,可能是因为这件衣服他穿不下,也可能是因为他不喜欢这个颜色或款色,也有可能他衣服太多。
动机三:Do you a favor 帮忙
还有一种动机便是因为纯粹的帮忙性质。比如当你面试需要一件西装时,他就把自己新买的送你了;当你要参加运动时,他就把自己的运动服给了你等。
如若你也能先考虑以上3种动机,我相信你的话题会很有故事性。接着我们就从小问题本身着手来明确下它们的答题方向。
01
What the clothing was
此小问的拓展只需从物品类的维度中挑选适合的即可,我重点推荐以下两个维度:
• Brand 品牌
品牌可分为知名和不知名,之后我们可以通过品牌来说明它们的价格/质量/设计等内容。
Example:
I would like to talk about a suit. It was my first ever piece of clothing from a big name brand 大品牌, called Armani. It was probably expensive to buy. You can feel the quality in the material and it makes me look sharp 时尚的 when wearing it.
• Appearance 外貌
外貌的描述略显难度,你也可参考此篇推送《一件衣服》(点击标题查看原文)。此篇中的第三小问,我详细讲解了衣服外貌的描述,大家可以有所借鉴。
Example:
A piece of clothing that comes to mind is a cardigan 开衫, which is a knitted jacket made of wool. Even though it is a little old fashioned, I really love it because it is a lovely vibrant 鲜艳的 green colour. and has big pockets at the front When I wear it, I stand out, feel comfortable, and have a place to put my phone and keys.
02
When you got it
鉴于此题需要给出一个具体的时间,我们可以按"具体时间点"的拓展规则来完成回答。
"具体时间点"包括:Year-Month-Date-Hour
以上信息不需要全给,只需挑选2-3个从大刀到小进行说明即可。比如:"Year-Date";"Month-Date-Hour"。
若你记不清具体的"Date",你可以说明下"星期几/天气/早中晚",因为这些都和一天有关;具体的"Hour"则可以通过"Before/after/while"来圈定时间范围,比如:"吃完早饭后"/"睡午觉前"。
鉴于第三小问会问到和赠送者相关的内容,此小问尽量避免提及。
Example one:
I remember I received it when I was in middle school. It was my birthday and when I got home from school, it was waiting for me on my desk.
Example two:
I received it about a year ago. I clearly remember it was about a week before my university graduation. One day when I was at home, I received a notification on my phone to collect a parcel 快递 downstairs. Even though I hadn't bought anything online, I still rushed to the post office 快递站 immediately.
PS:此细节部分拓展尤为推荐,非常符合真实的生活情节。
03
Who gave it to you
此小问同时也出现在《特殊的蛋糕》的第三小问。针对这个小问题,我们有两种拓展方式:
① 直接式
直接说明这个"赠予者",接着可以按"5W2H"的维度拓展细节,包括:when/where/who/why/what/how much/ how often。也就是说,你可以进一步说明,他什么时候买的,从哪买的,和谁一起去买的,花了多少钱等。
除此之外,你也可以就"人"本身做适当的拓展,比如:性格等。
Example:
Actually, it was a gift from my cousin. She is a very considerate person and cares for me a lot. She usually prepares a special gift for me on big, important days. She told me that she had saved up for the gift for 6 months and that she had asked her friend who worked abroad to help her buy it from the USA.
② 猜测式
有的时候,当我们拿到东西的时候,我们并不知道究竟是谁送的。这个时候我们就会开始猜测。
比如:刚开始我认为可能是谁送我的,后来才发现,原来是谁送我的。之后,我们可以继续按"5W2H"进行拓展。
Example:
At first, I guessed it was a present from my mom, but actually, my grandmother had made it for me. She is a lovely person and is really into knitting but as she has poor eyesight, my mom doesn't like her doing it. So, she made it secretly and it took her a month to finish it. I was really touched that she went to so much effort.
04
Why the person gave it to you
针对此题的思考已在最终最开始说明。你可以按不同的动机选择不同的理由
礼物
Example one:表达关心
The reason why she gave it to me was that she wanted me to have something warm as winter was just around the corner. She bought the most expensive wool and chose my favourite colour. Although now it has seen better days 破旧的, I still have it in my wardrobe and wear it on chilly days.
Example two:表达感激
She gave the clothing to me as a way to show her gratitude and appreciation. As a year ago, I had given her a hand with her work. She was really touched by what I did for her. In order to pay me back 回报, she wanted to give me something special as a present. She knew I liked it as I had posted something about it on WeChat moments a while back and she had remembered and secretly bought it for me.
闲置送人
Example:衣服太小
She gave it to me, as it was way too small 太小 for her. She used to be very thin. However, when she started university, her new friends were real foodies 吃货 so she put on a lot of weight 变胖. She felt really sad that all her clothes didn't fit her anymore. As I was the same size as her, she gave it to me. I was really pleased with the hand-me-down. It was still very new and stylish. It also helped me to save money.
帮忙
Example:帮助应对面试
Actually, the reason why she gave me the suit was that I had a last-minute 紧急的 interview which was very important to me. The interview was very formal and we were expected to wear formal clothes. However, I didn’t have a suit handy and it would have been impossible to buy a new one within 30 mins. When she saw that I was very anxious, she gave me a hand and lent me one of hers. I was so appreciative. Because of her, my interview was successful. To congratulate me, she said that i could keep the suit.
看完以上新航道南京雅思辅导班小编的讲解,你再来看看这两篇话题,你有想法了么?
收到特殊蛋糕
Describe a special cake you received from others
You should say:
• When it happened
• Where it happened
• Who you got the cake from
• And explain why it was a special cake
送朋友的礼物
Describe a gift you would like to buy for your friend
You should say:
• What the gift would be
• Who you would like to give it to
• Why you would like to send a gift to the person
• And explain why you would choose that gift for the person
参考答案:【别人给你的衣服】
•What the clothing was
A piece of clothing that comes to mind is a cardigan, which is a knitted jacket made of wool. Even though it is a little old fashioned, I really love it because it is a lovely vibrant green colour. and has big pockets at the front When I wear it, I stand out, feel comfortable, and have a place to put my phone and keys.
•When you got it
I remember I received it when I was in middle school. It was my birthday and when I got home from school, it was waiting for me on my desk.
•Who gave it to you
At first, I guessed it was a present from my mom, but actually, my grandmother had made it for me. She is a lovely person and is really into knitting but as she has poor eyesight, my mom doesn't like her doing it. So, she made it secretly and it took her a month to finish it. I was really touched that she went to so much effort.
•Why the person gave it to you
The reason why she gave it to me was that she wanted me to have something warm as winter was just around the corner. She bought the most expensive wool and chose my favourite colour. Although now it has seen better days, I still have it in my wardrobe and wear it on chilly days.