老年人运动计划—2023年6.9雅思写作大作文社会类话题
写作作为雅思考试中不可分割的一部分，一直以来都是困扰各路考生的老大难问题;经常有朋友和我说，阅读听力考到8了，写作口语还是6，很多同学也是对于写作就是一个弃疗的状态。
其实写作很简单(迫真), 但是需要长时间的积累和练习, 掌握写作的结构和问题的类型。千万不要因为懒或者怕写错而不动笔，进而慢慢变成躺平的状态。对此侃侃学长只能表示……
对于写作中常见的问题啊，各种方面的因素都有，有的同学说没有话题思路吧、有的说词都会就是写起来用不上吧、还有的说想法挺多写出来洋洋洒洒一大堆，总之就是：
单词句式全都会
想法思路一大堆
真到关键考试时
提笔忘字写稀碎
Okeydokey!首先我们先来看一下这期雅思大作文题目，2023年6月9日 社会解决类话题：
Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem? (2023/6/9——社会类)
1. 读题审题、标注核心论点
Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but there are few of them taking enough physical exercise. 医生鼓励老年人经常锻炼身体，然而鲜有老人做了足够的运动。
What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved? (问题与解决类题目)
造成这一现象的原因?如何能被改变?
2. 规划结构:
• 分析问题 + 针对问题的解决方法
1. Introduction：topic sentence + answer – (非常常见的现象、由多种原因导致，解决方式需要从多方入手)
2. Details：explain why older people do not take regular exercise (解释老年人做不到足够的运动)
3. Details: explain how can we solve the problems (解释如何解决这一问题)
4. Conclusion：repeat the answer
3. 头脑风暴：
• explain why older people do not take regular exercise
1. most of the elderly think that they are physically unable.
2. lack of self-esteem and self-awareness.
3. some of them are physically unable or have physical conditions which make regular exercise impossible.
4. these conditions might become obstacles for them to exercise regularly.
• explain how can we solve the problems1. we should encourage them to do more sport exercise.2. step by step, we can foster a habit of doing sports in the old folks.3. For whom the physical condition has become a problem, there should be professionals to aid these people.4. by introducing rehabilitation programs, we might be able to let these people have a routine of exercise.
例文解析
1
文章开头
• topic sentence + answer – (非常常见的现象、由多种原因导致，解决方式需要从多方入手)
There has always been a discussion over the health issue of the aged ones. Despite the tireless effort of doctors talking them into doing more exercises, very few of them actually do.While I think it can be related to several reasons and, there are clear ways to improve this situation.
2
文章主体：(部分)
• explain why older people do not take regular exercise
1. most of the elderly think that they are physically unable.
2. lack of self-esteem and self-awareness
3. some of them are physically unable or have physical conditions which make regular exercise impossible.
4. lack of support might become obstacles for them to exercise regularly.
(主题句)I think there are multiple causes of why old people rarely have a strict exercise routine.
1. First of all, most old people are reluctant to participate in any form of sports activity because they do not believe in themselves.2. As we age, we lose not only muscles and bone density but also confidence for most activities, this loss can be attributed to perceptions of decreased fitness and body competency.4. On the other aspect, chronic illness, disability, joint pain, etc. are common health problems that can keep older adults from exercising. They may fear pain, further injury, or sickness, or simply assume that they can’t physically do the work. 3. Combined with a lack of knowledge or proper support, one can easily adopt a sedentary lifestyle.
3
文章主体：(第二部分)
• explain how can we solve the problems
1. we should encourage them to do more sport exercise.
2. step by step, we can foster a habit of doing sports in the old folks.
3. For whom the physical condition has become a problem, there should be professionals to aid these people.
(主题句)Despite the numerous conditions we are facing, I still believe we can solve the situation. 2 For starters, we must focus on the mental issue here by clearing out the psychological barriers old folks are facing.3. We should encourage them from different angles, for example, by explaining the benefits of regular exercise, or even better, letting one of their own demonstrate to them that, in fact, it can be quite easy. 1. As for others with any physical conditions, there should be starter programs for them to start up slowly and build up long-term goals gradually. 4. Last but not least, professionals like personal trainers or health educators should get involved and show the elderly that doing exercise regularly can be easy and extremely beneficial.
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文章结尾
• Conclusion：repeat the answer(复述观点—强调主题 + 适当展开)
In conclusion, I can totally understand why an old person would be difficult to adopt a regular-exercising lifestyle, mentally and physically. Yet, if we can overcome these hurdles, with proper assistance, we can definitely solve the situation.
来源：雅思foru
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