2024年6月01日雅思大作文示范写作 | 私立医疗的利与弊
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本期作者：张婷婷
2024年6月01日雅思大作文示范写作 | 私立医疗的利与弊
Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?(2024/06/01)
范文及解析
Introduction
The escalating demand for high-quality healthcare and the scarcity of public healthcare facilities have intensified as more people recognize the importance of maintaining good health. Consequently, many hold an overly idealistic view of private healthcare. However, in my opinion, the drawbacks of private healthcare outweigh its benefits.
解析
本次考题属于利弊类议论文，这个题型在本年度考察的频率整体不高，但是这个题型整体的难度并不大;private healthcare的好处跟坏处我们可以这样讨论：好处可以写有更高的效率，更好的服务，减轻公立医院的财政负担;让人们选择更好的医疗服务，灵活性更高;坏处可以去写费用比较昂贵，唯利是图，缺乏专业人员等。
❖ escalating adj. 逐步上涨的;
❖ scarcity n. 不足，缺乏;
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随着越来越多的人认识到保持身体健康的重要性，对高质量医疗保健的需求不断增加，而公共医疗保健设施的匮乏也加剧了这一需求。因此，许多人对私营医疗抱有过于理想主义的看法。然而,在我看来,私立医疗保健的缺点大于它的好处。
Body 1
Private hospitals do come with their own boons, among which the most conspicuous one would be significantly alleviating the financial burden on public hospitals. With limited budgets, governments, as the organizer and coordinator of the whole society, should allot funds to other essential areas, be they education and technology or perfecting social welfare system and enhancing infrastructure. Additionally, with private healthcare, patients have access to a wider range of options that may provide more personalized services, thereby enhancing their overall treatment experience.
解析
私立医院确实大大减轻了公立医院的财政负担;
❖ boon n. 裨益，优势，有用的东西;
❖ conspicuous adj. 引人注目的，明显的;
❖ allot v. 分配，划拨;
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私立医院确实有其自身的优势，其中最显著的一点就是大大减轻了公立医院的财政负担。由于预算有限，作为整个社会组织者和协调者的政府，应该将资金分配到其他必要的领域，无论是教育、科技还是完善社会保障体系和加强基础设施建设。此外，私立医疗机构为患者提供了更广泛的选择，可能提供更个性化的服务，从而提升他们的整体治疗体验。
Body 2
Nonetheless, a solid majority of private healthcare facilities are mercenary, prioritizing profits over the well-being of their patients. While it is undeniable that a hospital's primary objective is to treat patients and save lives, owners of private healthcare are often solely focused on financial gain, contradicting the fundamental values of hospitals. Heartbreaking instances have been reported where some private hospitals callously refuse to save the lives of impoverished individuals. By this token, heavy reliance on private healthcare facilities seems unrealistic.
解析
大多数私立医疗机构都是唯利是图的，将利润置于患者的福祉之上;
❖ mercenaryadj. 雇佣的;唯利是图的;
❖ prioritize v. 优先考虑(处理);
❖ contradicting v. 反驳;顶触;
❖ heartbreaking adj. 令人心碎的;让人心疼的;
❖ callously adv. 冷酷无情地;麻木不仁地;
❖ impoverished adj. 贫困的，赤贫的;
❖ by this token 按照这个逻辑;由此推断;
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然而，大多数私立医疗机构都是唯利是图的，将利润置于患者的福祉之上。尽管不可否认医院的主要目的是治疗患者、挽救生命，但许多私立医疗机构的所有者往往只专注于追求财务收益，这与医院的基本价值观相悖。有报道称，一些私立医院无情地拒绝拯救贫困人士的生命。因此，过分依赖私立医疗机构似乎是不切实际的。
Body 3
Furthermore, numerous private health care facilities lack qualified professionals to deliver medical services. Even though treatment at some private hospitals may be more expensive than at most public hospitals, patients often do not receive the high-quality care advertised on social media platforms. Instead, their physical conditions may even deteriorate after receiving treatments due to inexperienced doctors with fraudulent credentials working at these establishments.
解析
许多私立医疗机构缺乏合格的专业人员来提供医疗服务。
❖ deteriorate v. 恶化，变坏;
❖ fraudulent adj. 欺诈的，诈骗的;
❖ credential n. 资格证明;资格证书;
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此外，许多私立医疗机构缺乏合格的专业人员来提供医疗服务。尽管一些私立医院的治疗费用可能比大多数公立医院更高，但患者往往无法在社交媒体平台上宣传的高质量护理中受益。相反，由于这些机构的无经验的、有欺诈性资质的医生，他们的身体状况甚至可能恶化。
Conclusion
In conclusion, while private medical centers are enjoying increasingly higher popularity among the general public, they are not without their inherent drawbacks. Until these issues are addressed and resolved, it is premature to consider transitioning medical services to for-profit hospitals.
解析
❖ inherent adj. 内在的，固有的;
❖ address v. 处理，设法解决;
❖ premature adj. 过早的,草率的;
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总之，尽管私立医疗中心越来越受到公众的欢迎，但它们也存在一些固有的缺点。直到这些问题得到解决之前，将医疗服务转移到营利性医院还为时过早。
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