南京雅思小编为大家准备了一篇雅思口语高分范文,小编对这篇范文做了以下分析,希望能帮助大家。
下面以社交网络类话题social networking为例,为大家仔细讲解考官提供的范文。当然,此范文的评价是除去语音和现场发挥状况的分数考量,而从词汇,句式,连贯度以及思维方式几个方面进行评判,仅供参考。
1. What kinds of social networking websites do you like to use?
Um…I suppose the main one I use is weibo, which is basically the equivalent of Twitter in the West. And um… as well as that, I occasionally use a website called renrenwang, which is essentially a Chinese version of Facebook, although I don’t really use it as much as I used to, because I think weibo’s a bit better.
“你喜欢使用哪种社交网站?”这里的回答是微博,考生可以注意一下,开始的“Um…I suppose……”似乎是有停顿的,但是为什么还能够得高分呢?其实雅思口语适当的停顿并不是坏事,有时候还能够给大家思考答案的时间,上述的I suppose其实就表明了回答者在思考。再来看which is……非限定性定语从句,对微博的解释,相当于西方的Twitter。And um… as well as that连接词,顺承到人人网的介绍,中文版的脸书,及其优势。整个回答十分完整,定语从句和让步状语从句使句式避免单一,词汇显然是合格的。有明显的连接词和交流标记词,虽然有停顿但是能够给人一种在思考,与人交流的感觉,所以整个回答不管是从词汇,句式还是连贯度上都是非常的范文,而且能够让人感受到交流的氛围是十分难能可贵的。
考生还可以参考积累下面提炼出来的一些短语和词汇:
the equivalent of – 相等于
Essentially -大体上;基本上
Chinese version – 中国版
2. Is it easy to find real friends on a social networking site?
I’m honestly not that sure because I’ve never really made a big effort to find friends on the Internet, but thinking about it, I’d say it’s probably not that easy, although it’s definitely possible, because um… I think you never quite know someone properly until you’ve met them in the flesh. At least that’s been my experience anyway!
“在社交网站上交到真正的朋友简单吗?”——首先,坦白的说,是不确定的,因为没有试图在社交网站上交过朋友。但是but thinking about it, I’d say it’s probably not that easy, although it’s definitely possible, because转折连词和交流标记词同时使用,陈述自己的看法……整个衔接是非常紧密的。而且在句式词汇上的运用也是没有问题的。同时也能够给人以英式思维思考交流的感觉。所以综合起来此答案也在8分的水平。
下面是一些比较地道的词汇、短语,考生可以参考使用:
Properly - thoroughly, completely; 彻底地
In the flesh - 本人
At least that’s been my experience anyway! - 至少按照我的经验是这样的!
以上就是南京新航道小编为大家分析的这篇高分范文,希望考生们能够考的高分