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8月24日雅思A类大作文范文及写作思路分享

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    今天新航道雅思频道小编为大家整理了8月24日雅思写作A类大作文范文及写作思路分享,供大家参考,以下是详细内容。

   Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent of each other. Others think the modern world gets people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

  段 : 社会背景描述+正向/反向观点表达+ 自己观点

  Along with the highly-developed science and technology and all-round improvement of production efficiency, modern society dominated by industrial manufacturing makes it possible to change the relation between individuals to a large extent. Therefore, some individuals deem that people tend to increasingly depend on each other. Others, nevertheless, including me, are convinced that modern society makes people become more independent of each other than ever before, given changes of working environments and individual values.

  第二段:外因+例证

  To begin with, the increasing complexity of working environments resulting from modern society gives rise to more independence of individuals. For example, huge pressures, fierce competitions and detailed and specific division of labor in modern society need people to accomplish relevant jobs more independently of each other in spite of existing collaboration with each other. Hence, dedicating more time and energy into their own work means reducing the time devoted to working by relying on others. From this point, the increasing independence of people living in modern society is the irreversible tendency of the society.

  第三段:内因+例证

  In addition, the great changes of individual values evoked by modern society makes people turn out to be more independent. To be better qualified for work and stand out from the crowds , a growing number of individuals are inclined to more emphasizing on the comprehensive improvement of skills instead of seeking and relying on assistance from outside and from others, tackling numerous and complicated issues that they are confronted with independently .

  第四段:让步段 另一种观点的合理性+对此观点反驳

  Admittedly, completion of plentiful of projects and tasks need the coordination and cooperation of team to cope with instead of merely depending on individuals, therefore, the mutual reliance between people becomes more intensified. However, the cooperation is based on the efforts of independent individuals in possession of relevant skills and qualifications, that is to say, the dependence of the individuals is the vital key to impacting collaboration. Undeniably, the independence of individuals required by the current society is more prominent than dependence of each other.

  第五段: 总结全文 +提出建议

  On balance, after summarizing the outlined perspectives above, I am convinced that complexity of working environments and changes of individual values in the modern society lead to more independence among people, which is also the essential characteristic required by developments of the current society , meanwhile, confronting with the arduous and complicated tasks could enhance mutual collaboration further.

 

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