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“大圣”雅思写作语料库：网络交易的个人和社会影响

Nowadays, peopleperform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping as well as business transactions,without the need of meeting other people face to face. What are the possibleeffects of the phenomenon on the individual and the society as a whole?

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网络购物对于个人影响：

1. 利：通过网络进行购物可以极大限度的节省时间，减少地理上的障碍，而且网购商品价格相对低廉

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2. 弊：，因为网络商品价格相对较低，很多人在打折期时无节制购买商品，导致经济负担。【EBay】

网络购物对于社会影响：

1. 利：很多年轻人可以开网店赚钱，这种工作方式时间灵活，同时解决部分就业问题

2. 弊：缺乏网购监管，消费者容易买到假货。网络犯罪成为社会问题，例如，侵犯个人隐私，很多不法分子传播病毒，窃取密码，侵犯隐私，非法牟利。

原创雅思写作语料库：

1. Themerits of on-line shopping and on-line business prevail over its possibledemerits. 网络购物和网络交易的利大于弊。

2. Manyyoungsters like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods 许多年轻人喜欢把赚到的钱花在他们喜欢的商品上。

4. In thisessay，I willendeavor to examine the impacts brought about by this on-line business tractionboth on individual consumers and the society. 本文中，我将努力探究下网络交易带来的个人和社会影响。

5. Theinvention and popularity of the computer has profoundly revolutionized modernpeople’s option ofconsumption 互计算机的发明和普及深刻地改变了人们的购物选择。

6. Someyoung ladies are addicted to cyber consumption out of the reason of seizing theopportunities of discount 出于抓住打折的机会的目的，很多年前女孩网络购物上瘾。

7. On-lineshopping has been boosting like the mushrooms after spring rains. 网络购物就像是雨后春笋般不断地增长。

8. Excessiveon-line consumption will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumerseconomically. 过度的网络消费对于非理性消费者施加了经济压力。

9. Incomparison with the traditional shopping, the cyber shopping enjoys its uniqueadvantages , which quite fit the young consumers’taste. It is no necessary for consumers to take trouble to gooutside, just click their mouse, the goods will be delivered to them. 和传统的购物相比，网络购物有其独特的优势，这更符合年轻消费者的口味。消费者不需要外出，只需点击一下鼠标，商品就会送到他们手中。

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10. It ishighly possible that consumers might be fooled into buying fake or illegalproducts. 消费者很有可能被欺骗购买虚假的非法的商品。

11. Somelaw-breakers draw on the Internet to deliver the bait or disseminate virus inorder to steal the password and reap fabulous profits illegally.一些不法分子利用互联网发送诱饵，传播病毒，窃取密码，非法牟利。

12. On-linebusiness transaction is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for goodor evil. 网络交易是一把双刃刀，有利有弊。

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