雅思写作考试中,句子的结构是评分的一项十分重要的因素,怎样才能有效的高分句子呢?其实,高分句子并不意味着就要写多难的句子,简洁、多样、连贯,这是高分句子必备的条件,下面,小编为大家整理在雅思写作中如何有效的拿到高分的方法,供同学们参考。
1. 一致:如句内的逻辑关系,注意检查是否存在简单推论、逻辑残缺、逻辑悖论、依赖偏见等。
Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician。
→ He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician。
2. 连贯:这个问题在平行结构、共用主语、使用指代的情况下尤其需要注意。
We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman。
→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable。
Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman。
He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious。
→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured。
Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach。
→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach。
Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach。
He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed。
→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting。
Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed。
3. 简洁:英美文化推崇坦率和直接,通常不需要体现咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。
It was small in size and blue in colour。
→ It was small and blue。
He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France。
→ He prefers French wines。
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